A.I.: Artificial Intelligence Part 5/5 A
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wl_fanfictionTitle: A.I.: Artificial Intelligence Part 5/5 A
Author: greenforgreen
Rating: T for language
Pairings/Characters: Greg/Jeff, Josie, Colin, Clive
Summary: In the year 2045, a new creation by Dr. Mochrie is set to revolutionize science and human nature. It is a robot with intellect far beyond comprehension and a love far greater than you'll know. AU.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. This is not meant to harm, slander, or mirror those in this story.
Ah yes the finale. This is actually split into two different chapters because of length, so a side A and a side B. Sometime later today or tomorrow, there shall be the very last.
Morning
Jeff watched the sun rise and shine into the room. It was a long night, but it was incredible. He only knew technical terms, but he learned real love making from the moans below him.
Speaking of which, Greg groaned and moved to his side. Jeff smiled and kissed his lips; even with his eyes closed, the older's eyebrow still rose in question.
“Don't you ever sleep? You wore me out last night, man.” A smirk curled. “That was great.”
The younger shifted as he watched Greg yawn and stretch. It was going to be a long morning.
Proposition
“You wanted me to create another, Mr. Ander-?”
“Yes and please, call me Clive,” The man told him. “I have done the research and his model is perfect. Create another and give me rights to his design. If you do, you'll not only never worry about money, but you will be famous for this achievement.”
Dr. Mochrie thought hard on this. Was it right? Hell no. There was only one Jeff to him. But... this was the dream he wanted to achieve. This man could help create more mecha to bring the races together.
Finally he nodded.
Greed
Humans and greed join hand in hand.
It's not the value of the item, but the idea of possessing drives humans to this. Humans can and have owned everything, even other people. Greed is used to help the wicked manipulate the others; both forces act against each other and who wins, leaves as a loser still. Greed replaces humanity within with useless feelings of temporary security.
Mecha do not act greedy, for they need or want nothing. They are programmed and used by humans to create wealth of sorts. They don't carry desire nor possessiveness and they have no ambition.
Heart
Josie smiled as she watched the two men across from her. Jeff had a warm glow in his eyes as he looked at Greg and hung over him. She knew something just happened between them; she tried to hide the grin behind her cup.
It just wasn't something you see everyday: a human and a robot together like a real couple. It was heart-warming to see Greg genuinely happy; it was the best mood he's been in since before Jen gotten sick. She didn't want to stress these two.
Josie pretended not to see the small kiss they “secretly” shared.
Shock
“Do you love me?”
Greg stopped and blinked at him. “Love you? Well... Jeff, we just fucked once. You can't really decide that after one go.”
“I love you, Greg. Why is it hard returning that emotion?”
Jeff was growing angry. He knew when you loved someone, the feeling is mutual. It didn't compute. Greg wasn't feeling good; he hated feeling vulnerable, especially to this... machine!
“Hey listen! You're just a damn robot used by US! Do you think anyone would love you? I just needed the release!”
He left Jeff in complete shock... and hurt.
Another Dialogue
“YOU TOLD HIM WHAT?”
“Shut. Up. Alright? He's just a robot.”
“Who cares? He loves and does everything for you! Doesn't that mean anything?”
“Will you fuck off? I'm sick and tired of you meddling, Josie. You got a husband, go annoy him.”
“You are our friend Greg. Your best interests are our responsibility because you're too sorry for yourself to move on. Jen wouldn't want you to waste away!”
“DAMMIT! Go Away Josie!”
“Oh, I will go. Don't be surprised to find yourself alone, Greg. You will regret every word you said.”
Anger
Anger: a strong feeling of displeasure and belligerence aroused by a wrong; wrath; ire.
One of the purest emotions to befall man. Anger creates war. Anger creates displeasure. Anger creates pain, discrimination, and hate. Out of the three true emotions, anger is the most influential. Everything is noticed when the subject is angered or provoking the said emotion. Humans experience this the most. Mecha can only describe the strong feeling, but they cannot experience the raw power of anger. Rational computing eliminates the anger to prevent wrong.
Without it, mecha would be like the humans, but stronger and no guilt.
Loneliness
Jeff sat outside on the grass with the wind blowing in his hair.
Abandoned again...
He shuddered, wanting to be upset but knowing he couldn't. He couldn't cry... he couldn't rip a real life heart from his chest... he couldn't draw blood. Even a robot is denied the pleasure of lessening the pain. He was frustrated with his makeup. All he was, was a mass of wire and circuits. He hated himself for being a creation of love, but to not be able to receive it. If he were real, of course things would be different.
If he were real...
Home
Jeff decided to leave that exact moment. He knew how to fix this. He'd find and beg Dr. Mochrie to enhance his anatomy to replicate a human's exactly. Greg would love him if he were alive. Using his GPS, he walked in the direction where he knew the lab was. He was eager to see his creator... his father again. He would tell him everything that happened; Dr. Mochrie would be so proud of his progress and maybe wouldn't be angry he came back. Soon he'd be real and be loved.
It was all wishful thinking of a naïve mind.
Revelations
Greg had spent the entire day in thought after what Josie said.
He really was wasting his life to the quick, indecent pleasures of forgetting his past. He needed to settle down again, allow himself to move on properly.
But Greg knew who was the only one who could help. Jeff was redemption. This android changed his life. He had to find and apologize to him. Greg was going to fix things and make it known that he returns Jeff's love. He wasn't about to fuck up again.
…
He grew into a icy panic when he couldn't find Jeff.
Identical
Jeff saw the building in sight as midnight approached. He smiled widely and ran the last few strides of walkway to the door. He flung open the door and continued inside.
Finding Dr. Mochrie's lab, Jeff walked inside.
...He froze.
There was a young man standing there. He wore baggy white clothes, same as Jeff did during his time here. The man's hair was black, but his hazel eyes were filled with not innocence, but empty intelligence. Otherwise he was identical to Jeff.
He couldn't believe it. “Who are you?”
The man smiled. “I'm Jeff. You're like me.”
Release
“No, no! You can't be me! I'm Jeff!”
Jeff was growing upset quickly. He didn't want this; he didn't want to share Greg with this mechanized imposter.
“We are both Jeff. We are created for the same purpose.”
“No! You can't have Greg. I loved him first!”
“I am created to love.”
“NO!”
Metal and plastic were flung into the air as Jeff tore apart the android out of anger and fear. He didn't stop until Dr. Mochrie and Clive Anderson entered and pry the flailing mecha away from the pile of electricity and programming.
Author: greenforgreen
Rating: T for language
Pairings/Characters: Greg/Jeff, Josie, Colin, Clive
Summary: In the year 2045, a new creation by Dr. Mochrie is set to revolutionize science and human nature. It is a robot with intellect far beyond comprehension and a love far greater than you'll know. AU.
Disclaimer: This is a work of fiction. This is not meant to harm, slander, or mirror those in this story.
Ah yes the finale. This is actually split into two different chapters because of length, so a side A and a side B. Sometime later today or tomorrow, there shall be the very last.
Morning
Jeff watched the sun rise and shine into the room. It was a long night, but it was incredible. He only knew technical terms, but he learned real love making from the moans below him.
Speaking of which, Greg groaned and moved to his side. Jeff smiled and kissed his lips; even with his eyes closed, the older's eyebrow still rose in question.
“Don't you ever sleep? You wore me out last night, man.” A smirk curled. “That was great.”
The younger shifted as he watched Greg yawn and stretch. It was going to be a long morning.
Proposition
“You wanted me to create another, Mr. Ander-?”
“Yes and please, call me Clive,” The man told him. “I have done the research and his model is perfect. Create another and give me rights to his design. If you do, you'll not only never worry about money, but you will be famous for this achievement.”
Dr. Mochrie thought hard on this. Was it right? Hell no. There was only one Jeff to him. But... this was the dream he wanted to achieve. This man could help create more mecha to bring the races together.
Finally he nodded.
Greed
Humans and greed join hand in hand.
It's not the value of the item, but the idea of possessing drives humans to this. Humans can and have owned everything, even other people. Greed is used to help the wicked manipulate the others; both forces act against each other and who wins, leaves as a loser still. Greed replaces humanity within with useless feelings of temporary security.
Mecha do not act greedy, for they need or want nothing. They are programmed and used by humans to create wealth of sorts. They don't carry desire nor possessiveness and they have no ambition.
Heart
Josie smiled as she watched the two men across from her. Jeff had a warm glow in his eyes as he looked at Greg and hung over him. She knew something just happened between them; she tried to hide the grin behind her cup.
It just wasn't something you see everyday: a human and a robot together like a real couple. It was heart-warming to see Greg genuinely happy; it was the best mood he's been in since before Jen gotten sick. She didn't want to stress these two.
Josie pretended not to see the small kiss they “secretly” shared.
Shock
“Do you love me?”
Greg stopped and blinked at him. “Love you? Well... Jeff, we just fucked once. You can't really decide that after one go.”
“I love you, Greg. Why is it hard returning that emotion?”
Jeff was growing angry. He knew when you loved someone, the feeling is mutual. It didn't compute. Greg wasn't feeling good; he hated feeling vulnerable, especially to this... machine!
“Hey listen! You're just a damn robot used by US! Do you think anyone would love you? I just needed the release!”
He left Jeff in complete shock... and hurt.
Another Dialogue
“YOU TOLD HIM WHAT?”
“Shut. Up. Alright? He's just a robot.”
“Who cares? He loves and does everything for you! Doesn't that mean anything?”
“Will you fuck off? I'm sick and tired of you meddling, Josie. You got a husband, go annoy him.”
“You are our friend Greg. Your best interests are our responsibility because you're too sorry for yourself to move on. Jen wouldn't want you to waste away!”
“DAMMIT! Go Away Josie!”
“Oh, I will go. Don't be surprised to find yourself alone, Greg. You will regret every word you said.”
Anger
Anger: a strong feeling of displeasure and belligerence aroused by a wrong; wrath; ire.
One of the purest emotions to befall man. Anger creates war. Anger creates displeasure. Anger creates pain, discrimination, and hate. Out of the three true emotions, anger is the most influential. Everything is noticed when the subject is angered or provoking the said emotion. Humans experience this the most. Mecha can only describe the strong feeling, but they cannot experience the raw power of anger. Rational computing eliminates the anger to prevent wrong.
Without it, mecha would be like the humans, but stronger and no guilt.
Loneliness
Jeff sat outside on the grass with the wind blowing in his hair.
Abandoned again...
He shuddered, wanting to be upset but knowing he couldn't. He couldn't cry... he couldn't rip a real life heart from his chest... he couldn't draw blood. Even a robot is denied the pleasure of lessening the pain. He was frustrated with his makeup. All he was, was a mass of wire and circuits. He hated himself for being a creation of love, but to not be able to receive it. If he were real, of course things would be different.
If he were real...
Home
Jeff decided to leave that exact moment. He knew how to fix this. He'd find and beg Dr. Mochrie to enhance his anatomy to replicate a human's exactly. Greg would love him if he were alive. Using his GPS, he walked in the direction where he knew the lab was. He was eager to see his creator... his father again. He would tell him everything that happened; Dr. Mochrie would be so proud of his progress and maybe wouldn't be angry he came back. Soon he'd be real and be loved.
It was all wishful thinking of a naïve mind.
Revelations
Greg had spent the entire day in thought after what Josie said.
He really was wasting his life to the quick, indecent pleasures of forgetting his past. He needed to settle down again, allow himself to move on properly.
But Greg knew who was the only one who could help. Jeff was redemption. This android changed his life. He had to find and apologize to him. Greg was going to fix things and make it known that he returns Jeff's love. He wasn't about to fuck up again.
…
He grew into a icy panic when he couldn't find Jeff.
Identical
Jeff saw the building in sight as midnight approached. He smiled widely and ran the last few strides of walkway to the door. He flung open the door and continued inside.
Finding Dr. Mochrie's lab, Jeff walked inside.
...He froze.
There was a young man standing there. He wore baggy white clothes, same as Jeff did during his time here. The man's hair was black, but his hazel eyes were filled with not innocence, but empty intelligence. Otherwise he was identical to Jeff.
He couldn't believe it. “Who are you?”
The man smiled. “I'm Jeff. You're like me.”
Release
“No, no! You can't be me! I'm Jeff!”
Jeff was growing upset quickly. He didn't want this; he didn't want to share Greg with this mechanized imposter.
“We are both Jeff. We are created for the same purpose.”
“No! You can't have Greg. I loved him first!”
“I am created to love.”
“NO!”
Metal and plastic were flung into the air as Jeff tore apart the android out of anger and fear. He didn't stop until Dr. Mochrie and Clive Anderson entered and pry the flailing mecha away from the pile of electricity and programming.
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