[identity profile] goblover.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] wl_fanfiction

Okay, so it's been forever since when I was supposed to post this, but Clay asked me to do it so eventually...I did. I didn't actually enter the Secret Santa deal, I was just helping out when a person dropped. So this is basically a ficlet I guess? Done for [info]indybaggins

 She mentioned- -Something very, very kinky. I'm thinking sex club anonymous sex, gloryholes, gay sauna, BDSM, group sex, that kind of thing, the more crazy kinks you can get in there the more I'll love you ;)
 
I tried my best to write...something! So here it is.

Author: Goblover
Pairing: Greg/Ryan
Rating: PG-13, I guess. Or R

 

It started in the clubs. Ones where the bouncers knew them by reputation rather than names, where they exchanged mischievious looks with each other across long L-shaped bars, and where everything was covered with fine layers of cocaine dust.

Neither needn't approach each other, it didn't work like that. They were too old for pleasantries or shyness. A simple nod would do, and they'd whisk off to a more private area- though sometimes even that weren't necessary.

Greg preferred the bathroom. To him it was just the right amount of miserable and tawdry. No boundaries were set, no limit was too off-limits. He'd stake his claim of the night, toss him into a stall, and fuck him until come coated the walls.

He didn't feel great about it, but the changeover from stale air to fresh air as he walked outside was enough to mask it. And what did he care anyway?

Ryan had his own playbook. He liked the feeling of a private table, complete with closed curtains and a healthy supply of whiskey. He'd throw a man down on the small round table, their spine digging into the edge. Then he'd lean in close, close his hand over their throat, and push his thumb down into their Adam's apple. He'd wait until the surge of fear flowed into their eyes before releasing his hold. Then he'd 'flip em and fuck em', as he coined it.

Greg and Ryan didn't meet, they collided. Each of them fighting for control, Ryan grunting as his fingers yanked back on Greg's hair, Greg whispering comments that were funny only to him. Ryan went to choke him, Greg rerouted Ryan's hand forcefully, grinning madly. With practiced movements and hot breath, they came together.

They left each other satiated, but with the wild look in each of their eyes they were by no means done for good. Greg left Ryan with the comment of-

"See ya later, sunshine."

Ryan said nothing in return.

As more days passed, they found a rhythm. Stalk out the new blood, see where the path leads, but always, always end up together. Ryan soon learned Greg's name, not because he went out of his way to learn it, but because Greg could sometimes be particularly chatty.

For Greg, Ryan was simply 'Tall, Dark, and Handsome.'

One night, as Ryan was lazily giving Greg a handjob over shared glasses of something or other, Greg did something uncharacteristic. He stopped Ryan, taking his hand into his own and pulling out past the elastic waistband of his boxers. Ryan looked at him, slightly puzzled.

"Wouldn't want you to make a mess there, now would we?" he gave a half-grin. "Who'd clean that up?"

Soon after, Greg said his goodbyes and left the club.

Maybe he'd been having a bad day, maybe Ryan wasn't really giving it his all, maybe they were both too drunk to focus. Whatever it was, Greg was leaving. And fast.

So Ryan followed him. Right out to his car. Greg didn't hear him coming up behind him. Ryan grabbed him and spun him around. Greg gave a jump and a yell, which was just as well, he probably thought he was being mugged or some shit.

He quickly realized who it was and laughed it off.

Ryan took Greg by the shoulders and slammed him into his car. Greg let out a loud curse, looking up into Ryan's eyes, trying to determine whether it was a move made out of violence or not. And then Ryan kissed him.

Kissing wasn't something they had done. Fuck, they had done everything but. Kissing made things...personal. Real fucking personal.

Greg opened up the back door of the car and Ryan pushed him down onto the seats. He undid Greg's pants and pulled them and his boxers down to his knees. He kissed in lines up Greg's thighs and drew circles down them. He took Greg into his mouth, hearing his moans as he licked and sucked him. Greg reached down to run his fingers through Ryan's hair. Ryan wrenched his hand away. Greg could only laugh.

As Greg drew closer to climaxing, Ryan stopped momentarily to whisper his name to Greg. When Greg came, he could only repeat Ryan's name over and over.

It wasn't too long after that that Ryan took Greg home. It wasn't forever, and they were by no means promised to each other- but it was something. And it was more than the rest of everything combined.



 

Date: 2010-10-14 08:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rycolfan.livejournal.com
I loved this...seedy and dirty but with an uplifting ending.

Great work! ^_^

Date: 2010-10-14 03:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indybaggins.livejournal.com
So it was you!!! I was trying to guess, and then waiting for this fic to show up on the community :)

Greg and Ryan didn't meet, they collided This is beautiful. Actually, all of the descriptions are very spot on, dirty but deliciously in character as well. I love how you describe their stiles of fucking, the little details and how easy it is to envision this.
Thank you very much! <3

Date: 2010-10-15 07:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ocelotkitty.livejournal.com
This was really great! I loved the raw energy of it. Really true to Greg and Ryan's characters.

(And I giggled when I saw the part about "anonymous sex, gloryholes, gay sauna, BDSM, group sex" etc. and then the story was rated as PG-13!)

Date: 2010-10-16 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clayangel.livejournal.com
I love the way you immediately hit us with the fine details. You set up a scene so well in a so few sentences, which I find really impressive.

And the same comes through when you get into the characters. The way you have Greg associating sex with "miserable," for instance, is just great. It immediately lets you know so much about the character, and yet it flows so naturally. And the same with Ryan, the way you used the word "playbook" in association with him makes him appear all the more rough tumble for it.

And of course "Greg and Ryan didn't meet, they collided." is just a gorgeous line.

I love the feel of this, the grittiness and darkness, and despair masked as hope that it ends with. It's a really interesting piece. Like everything else you write, it's just so much fun to dissect. ^_^

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