1000points - Push
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wl_fanfictionTitle: Push
Author: Beccie
Table: 1
Pairing: Josie/Jeff, implied Jeff/Caroline
Rating: I'll say R but it could pass as PG-13 I guess
Prompt: Push
Warning: I have three kind of warnings:
Jeff lit up his final cigarette of the night. His evening was going perfectly. As soon as this cigarette was finished, he would walk back inside the sweaty, stinking box he called a club, grab Caroline from the bar and take her home for the night. Big deal Caroline was already with Tony and claimed she loved him. She was the one that came on to him; flirted with him constantly. She had already admitted she found him attractive.
And Jeff convinced himself he found her attractive too...
He stubbed out the remains of his cigarette when he felt a sudden pressure on his shoulder. Sucking in a deep breath, he went to turn around but another hand covered his eyes as the hand on his shoulder kept him still. He felt warm breath on his neck; this person was close to him. He tried to keep his heartbeat slow but it was proving difficult. What if he was about to be murdered? The breath left his neck but moved closer to his ear. With each exhale, he heard the soft, natural whine of a female voice. A familiar female voice.
"Josie? What are you doing?" he whispered, trying to deny the leap in his chest and the twist in his groin when he realised who was stood behind him. If he was truly honest with himself, he had always loved Josie. She was the girl he was going to marry one day...after he had finished fooling around that is. The breath on his ear remained but a whisper made goose bumps travel up his spine.
"Are you really going home with Caroline?" Her voice had an edge to it. Even in a whisper, Jeff knew that she wasn't feeling herself. Josie was the quiet girl. The very quiet girl who let the others take over. Who had a dreamy personality but was frequently upstaged by the screeching foghorn that was Caroline. Caroline was loud and obnoxious and fought for Jeff's undivided attention. Josie was subtle and sweet, attracting Jeff to her without trying. He wanted to protect her. Hold her tiny frame and assure her everything was ok. The Josie he knew was a far cry from the seductress coiling around him at this very moment.
"Yes I am Josie. A man has to have fun you know." The breath left his ear but the hand never left his eyes. He was blind to her actions but could feel from the manoeuvres in her wrist where she was moving. She was circling him it seemed.
"She is with one of your friends Jeff. Don't you find that a little...indecent shall we say?" In his head, Jeff had already thought about this. Of course it was indecent, but it hadn't mattered because Caroline was instigating the whole affair. But now, with Josie echoing the words of his conscience it started to hit home.
"What do you care Josie? We're adults and can make our own mistakes." Josie had heard enough. She took her hand away from him eyes and with quick reflexes, moved to stay behind him as he, inevitably, turned to try and get a look at her.
"Stop trying to look at me Jeff; you know I'm here. Why do you need to see me?" She approached behind him so that her soft chest met with his bony back. She wrapped her arms around the middle of his chest and rested her temple on one of his shoulder blades. Jeff took a deep breath and placed one hand over her linked ones. A bolt of electricity shot through him and he thanked his lucky stars that she was behind him and couldn't see the effect she had on him.
"Because I want to know if I'm dreaming or not." Jeff now closed his eyes and tried to lean back. Josie was too short for him to rest his head on her shoulders so he just faced towards the sky unsupported and concentrated on the feeling of her soft hands trailing over the fabric of his black shirt. Josie stretched up so that her mouth was level with his ear. She placed her tongue on the rim and licked along down to the lobe. Jeff let out a shuddering breath and leaned back further into Josie. She stopped licking his ear but breathed over the trail she had created, loving the way it twitched with each tingle.
"Jeff, you're not dreaming...close your eyes." Jeff was now powerless to her and closed his eyes carefully. He felt her leave his back and went back to supporting his own weight. He felt her carefully take one of his hands and lead him...somewhere. The lids of his eyes were darkening so it was obviously somewhere deprived of light. He was suddenly stopped and Josie took both of his hands, reaching both of them behind her. His hands brushed a rough surface. A wall. Desire shot through his body but he didn't dare open his eyes. As soon as he did, he knew it would all be over. He caressed his hands over her back, feeling every fold in the fabric of her clothing. He felt her push closer to him to whisper to him. He instantly felt himself blush. He was aware of his state of desire and now, so did Josie. He then felt her breath at his ear again and all thoughts left him.
"Lift me up. Push me against the wall." This was a command and Jeff was in no state to argue. He carefully lifted Josie and felt her legs instantly twine around his waist, pulling him in close to her and their most sensitive area touched. He moaned and pushed her backwards slowly until they could go no further backwards. He wished he could see her. He wished he could see her hair blowing in the wind; the colour of her dress; the lust in her eyes. But he couldn't. He could only imagine. He could only feel her; and boy did she feel good. Any resolve he may have had before had dissolved into goo. He lowered his head and his face met the crook of her bare neck. He started to kiss and lick at that area and felt Josie push further into him, thrusting her hips against his. He was burning up with passion and thrust back into her, craving bare skin contact.
"Kiss me..." he heard her whisper. He was speechless. He was mindless. His whole body flushed as he felt hands grab his face and pull him in. Their lips collided together sloppily. There was no skill behind it. Barely any thought. Just the caressing lips of two lovers in denial. Jeff thrust his tongue towards Josie’s and Josie accepted this. Their tongues played together a passionate game as they sucked on each other trying to gain dominance. One of Jeff's arms held Josie up and the other hand caressed her thigh. He felt her moan into his mouth and assumed he must be doing something right. He moved it up higher and realised she must be wearing a skirt as bare flesh went on forever. His hand trailed upwards and he felt Josie’s breath become shallow and more strained. Further and further his hand trailed, up her long, slender thigh, until he found the waistband of her panties. His hand went to remove them. However, his hand was batted away and the kiss was broken. Jeff protested and went to open his eyes but a hand covered them.
"Put me down Jeff." Jeff did as he was told and put Josie down. He was saddened by this move. He really was aching for her.
"Go. Don't keep Caroline waiting." Jeff was confused by this. He had forgotten all about Caroline until this very moment and suddenly, his lust for a quickie was gone. He wanted Josie. He wanted all of her. He wanted her all night and into the morning. He needed her. Then the hand was gone.
"Josie..." Jeff opened his eyes but saw no-one. He was alone in an alley with a dishevelled shirt and ruffled hair. Josie was nowhere to be seen. He felt like he wanted to cry. She had teased him into submission. Sighing, he passed a hand through his hair and started to make his way to the mouth of the alley. That is, until a voice stopped him.
"I've had to wait for you Jeff. Now it's your turn to do the waiting." He turned to see a shadow at the far end of the alley. He wanted to go over there. Stop her from leaving. Kiss her senseless. Make love to her in a stinking alley because he love her and couldn't wait for her. But he knew her better and in a second, the shadow disappeared and she was gone. Jeff took a deep breath and made his way back towards the club. Oh, he would have Caroline tonight and she would enjoy it. Shame he would be picturing Josie in her place.
Author: Beccie
Table: 1
Pairing: Josie/Jeff, implied Jeff/Caroline
Rating: I'll say R but it could pass as PG-13 I guess
Prompt: Push
Warning: I have three kind of warnings:
- Although it contains no actual 'smut' per say, has quite an erotic tone. This is the effect I wanted so just be warned that it's not smut but it's not innocent either.
- It lacks much 'plot' but this story came from a dream and stem from personal life so it might not make much sense. Just go with it! =D
- The two main pairings are basically so out there that it's almost obscene, but once again, go with it. They are both Whose Line cas members! =P I just have a love for odd pairing atm!
Jeff lit up his final cigarette of the night. His evening was going perfectly. As soon as this cigarette was finished, he would walk back inside the sweaty, stinking box he called a club, grab Caroline from the bar and take her home for the night. Big deal Caroline was already with Tony and claimed she loved him. She was the one that came on to him; flirted with him constantly. She had already admitted she found him attractive.
And Jeff convinced himself he found her attractive too...
He stubbed out the remains of his cigarette when he felt a sudden pressure on his shoulder. Sucking in a deep breath, he went to turn around but another hand covered his eyes as the hand on his shoulder kept him still. He felt warm breath on his neck; this person was close to him. He tried to keep his heartbeat slow but it was proving difficult. What if he was about to be murdered? The breath left his neck but moved closer to his ear. With each exhale, he heard the soft, natural whine of a female voice. A familiar female voice.
"Josie? What are you doing?" he whispered, trying to deny the leap in his chest and the twist in his groin when he realised who was stood behind him. If he was truly honest with himself, he had always loved Josie. She was the girl he was going to marry one day...after he had finished fooling around that is. The breath on his ear remained but a whisper made goose bumps travel up his spine.
"Are you really going home with Caroline?" Her voice had an edge to it. Even in a whisper, Jeff knew that she wasn't feeling herself. Josie was the quiet girl. The very quiet girl who let the others take over. Who had a dreamy personality but was frequently upstaged by the screeching foghorn that was Caroline. Caroline was loud and obnoxious and fought for Jeff's undivided attention. Josie was subtle and sweet, attracting Jeff to her without trying. He wanted to protect her. Hold her tiny frame and assure her everything was ok. The Josie he knew was a far cry from the seductress coiling around him at this very moment.
"Yes I am Josie. A man has to have fun you know." The breath left his ear but the hand never left his eyes. He was blind to her actions but could feel from the manoeuvres in her wrist where she was moving. She was circling him it seemed.
"She is with one of your friends Jeff. Don't you find that a little...indecent shall we say?" In his head, Jeff had already thought about this. Of course it was indecent, but it hadn't mattered because Caroline was instigating the whole affair. But now, with Josie echoing the words of his conscience it started to hit home.
"What do you care Josie? We're adults and can make our own mistakes." Josie had heard enough. She took her hand away from him eyes and with quick reflexes, moved to stay behind him as he, inevitably, turned to try and get a look at her.
"Stop trying to look at me Jeff; you know I'm here. Why do you need to see me?" She approached behind him so that her soft chest met with his bony back. She wrapped her arms around the middle of his chest and rested her temple on one of his shoulder blades. Jeff took a deep breath and placed one hand over her linked ones. A bolt of electricity shot through him and he thanked his lucky stars that she was behind him and couldn't see the effect she had on him.
"Because I want to know if I'm dreaming or not." Jeff now closed his eyes and tried to lean back. Josie was too short for him to rest his head on her shoulders so he just faced towards the sky unsupported and concentrated on the feeling of her soft hands trailing over the fabric of his black shirt. Josie stretched up so that her mouth was level with his ear. She placed her tongue on the rim and licked along down to the lobe. Jeff let out a shuddering breath and leaned back further into Josie. She stopped licking his ear but breathed over the trail she had created, loving the way it twitched with each tingle.
"Jeff, you're not dreaming...close your eyes." Jeff was now powerless to her and closed his eyes carefully. He felt her leave his back and went back to supporting his own weight. He felt her carefully take one of his hands and lead him...somewhere. The lids of his eyes were darkening so it was obviously somewhere deprived of light. He was suddenly stopped and Josie took both of his hands, reaching both of them behind her. His hands brushed a rough surface. A wall. Desire shot through his body but he didn't dare open his eyes. As soon as he did, he knew it would all be over. He caressed his hands over her back, feeling every fold in the fabric of her clothing. He felt her push closer to him to whisper to him. He instantly felt himself blush. He was aware of his state of desire and now, so did Josie. He then felt her breath at his ear again and all thoughts left him.
"Lift me up. Push me against the wall." This was a command and Jeff was in no state to argue. He carefully lifted Josie and felt her legs instantly twine around his waist, pulling him in close to her and their most sensitive area touched. He moaned and pushed her backwards slowly until they could go no further backwards. He wished he could see her. He wished he could see her hair blowing in the wind; the colour of her dress; the lust in her eyes. But he couldn't. He could only imagine. He could only feel her; and boy did she feel good. Any resolve he may have had before had dissolved into goo. He lowered his head and his face met the crook of her bare neck. He started to kiss and lick at that area and felt Josie push further into him, thrusting her hips against his. He was burning up with passion and thrust back into her, craving bare skin contact.
"Kiss me..." he heard her whisper. He was speechless. He was mindless. His whole body flushed as he felt hands grab his face and pull him in. Their lips collided together sloppily. There was no skill behind it. Barely any thought. Just the caressing lips of two lovers in denial. Jeff thrust his tongue towards Josie’s and Josie accepted this. Their tongues played together a passionate game as they sucked on each other trying to gain dominance. One of Jeff's arms held Josie up and the other hand caressed her thigh. He felt her moan into his mouth and assumed he must be doing something right. He moved it up higher and realised she must be wearing a skirt as bare flesh went on forever. His hand trailed upwards and he felt Josie’s breath become shallow and more strained. Further and further his hand trailed, up her long, slender thigh, until he found the waistband of her panties. His hand went to remove them. However, his hand was batted away and the kiss was broken. Jeff protested and went to open his eyes but a hand covered them.
"Put me down Jeff." Jeff did as he was told and put Josie down. He was saddened by this move. He really was aching for her.
"Go. Don't keep Caroline waiting." Jeff was confused by this. He had forgotten all about Caroline until this very moment and suddenly, his lust for a quickie was gone. He wanted Josie. He wanted all of her. He wanted her all night and into the morning. He needed her. Then the hand was gone.
"Josie..." Jeff opened his eyes but saw no-one. He was alone in an alley with a dishevelled shirt and ruffled hair. Josie was nowhere to be seen. He felt like he wanted to cry. She had teased him into submission. Sighing, he passed a hand through his hair and started to make his way to the mouth of the alley. That is, until a voice stopped him.
"I've had to wait for you Jeff. Now it's your turn to do the waiting." He turned to see a shadow at the far end of the alley. He wanted to go over there. Stop her from leaving. Kiss her senseless. Make love to her in a stinking alley because he love her and couldn't wait for her. But he knew her better and in a second, the shadow disappeared and she was gone. Jeff took a deep breath and made his way back towards the club. Oh, he would have Caroline tonight and she would enjoy it. Shame he would be picturing Josie in her place.
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Date: 2009-04-12 08:09 pm (UTC)THIS HAS TO BE THE BEST PAIRING I HAVE EVER READ!
oh my god! i never thought of this pairing and you have written it so well!
GAH! im just going to keep reading it
*toddles off to read again*
eeeeeekkk! just as good as the first time!!
Already told you that i love your fics but this is just the icing on the cake!
Love it beccie well done!
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Date: 2009-04-13 12:06 am (UTC)Jeff/Josie are so strange and almost obscene that they in fact work really well! I found that when writing them anyways! =D
Really glad you liked this because your comment is high praise indeed!
xxxx
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Date: 2009-04-13 10:55 am (UTC)I really did enjoy it