Tomorrow

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

as my lovely, wonderful, (im running out of adjectives here), beta ryanmochrie said, i'm on a creative streak... so here ya go?

Title: Demain

Rating: G? PG?

Pairing: Whomever you wish it to be, but if it helps I thought of Drew/Wayne when I wrote it...

Disclaimer: I am not assiciated with them in real life...now my dreams? that's different.

Summary:


They never let each other know, no that would be too easy. Who needs easy anyway? Instead they show it in subtle glances and small touches. To each, this is all they wish to show, for if they let it get further something may go wrong.

There is always the possibility that the other doesn’t feel the same way, but neither wants to think that way. Even if in some ways they do. Sometimes each just wishes they could just say it. Tell the other how they really feel, but they can’t.

They have too many pervious commitments. Wives, families, and even friends. Work doesn’t exactly make it easier on them either. Being in the spotlight, being in the public’s eye; this does not help to hide what each wishes to hide. The fact that they feel something for one another that they shouldn’t, at least shouldn’t to everyone else.

No matter how right it feels to each, everyone else happens to be bigger than them both. Everything they say would be drowned out by the hissing of a crowd. Or at least in their minds it’s this way. It doesn’t matter that it’s not true, that it’s even on everyone’s mind.

They are just afraid to face the facts. They don’t know what’s coming tomorrow, and this scares the both of them. If they were to see tomorrow, however, then they’d see the friend shaking their hands in congratulations. The wife wishes them luck, and the family welcomes the other into itself.

But they can’t see into tomorrow, so they are stuck where they’ve been for years. Still not letting each other know and it’s still slowly killing them both inside. And they both are to stubborn, or afraid, to let each other know. It’s not going to be easy.

Comments

[broadway-bound3.livejournal.com]

. . . I'm not sure what to say first . . . I imagined RyandColin in this but that's an automatic response to any open fic. It was hard to read, for me. My brain kept stumbling over the words, like there were too many or something. . . I don't know.

But it was a good way to kill a couple of minutes.

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

good. that's supposed to be the effect...it's like...i don't know, either. i just know that's supposed to be the effect you get. it's how i wrote it...like when i came back over it and read it again it was taht way, and i liked that effect. It worked, you know? or something...all i know is i meant it to be that way...but i can't guarentee that it works like that for everyone...

[broadway-bound3.livejournal.com]

Oh, well, if it's supposed to be that way then . . . um . . . Oh, gosh, I'm really bad at commenting. I'm just used to a smooth read; not having to backtrack and reread it. ^-^;

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

aww...I don't mean to like...(agrivate, confuse?) you. It's just that everyone's mind has it's own perception of reality. You mind wants to lead you down that path that it sees quickly, not stopping for anything else that may come across. When you see something like this, in this reality for anyone, it kind of makes your perception of reality go down a path of 'realness' it doesn't want to....does that explain what i was going for now? (that's the last time i read my psychology book before i go to bed...)

[broadway-bound3.livejournal.com]

You know what? I think that confused me some more. *holds head* Maybe we should discuss this in a different way. . . ??? I don't know. I'm gonna shut up now.

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

*facepalms* what is wrogn withus? there is definitly some sort of communication problem between us...

[broadway-bound3.livejournal.com]

yeah, probably. But oh well. We should have private discussions. Do you have AIM? That's the only one I use. We could discuss philosophy and fanfics. LoL.

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

o yea, mine is F0RMonkeys (the O on FOR being a Zero) I'll give you the others from that one...

[stilmoch.livejournal.com]

Color me an idiot, but what's "Demain" supposed to mean?

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

you're not an idiot...just not multi-lingual...it's tomorrow in French *g*

[stilmoch.livejournal.com]

Ahhhh...thank you. Glad I asked.

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

i'm glad you asked too, and for reference i usually put the english meaning of the title in the subject if the title is in a foreign language...

[indybaggins.livejournal.com]

Hey, random question, but do you really speek French? *is interested* There used to be some French fanfiction somewhere...

And I thought this was nice, I imagined Drew/Wayne, because hey, I actually like that pairing ;)

I like how you added "friends" to the previous commitments. I think that's something that gets considered too little, would they be afraid to lose there friends because of loving one? And it ended nicely too, with the "it's not going to be easy". I for one liked the many-words and the general feeling of it.

[krzcowzgomoo.livejournal.com]

thank you very much! The many-words i worked hard to perfect in this one...

Do i speak French? well....that's complicated. I used to be able to actually speak it, but I was like five or six when I could, but now I can only write and read it. I really don't write it a lot anymore so when I do write in French I'm not sure it always comes out gramatically correct...and i'm a stickler for grammer so that just agrivates me.

and hey! French fanfiction would be really cool!

[ryanmochrie.livejournal.com]

As I said, i love this and you!