Date: 2008-05-18 08:35 am (UTC)
I adored that.
That unfolded like a true horror story, with some great clues thrown in; I was hooked for the entire time. The drama was well illustrated and the pace was...well, perfect. The dialogue seemed natural and in character, and the occasional throwbacks to WL were lovely!
It maybe could have done with more of an explanation as to why Greg and Brad were picked out at the end, but that's a small quibble in an otherwise fantastic piece of work :)
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