Date: 2013-05-28 11:32 pm (UTC)
Welcome to the comm, and yay! You posted! Aww, I LOVED this. You've captured the Ryan/Colin friendship beautifully. A lot of things in this made me laugh, like: running through a cloud of air freshener (and holding hands through it, too). The running was important because it’s what they do in detergent ads, but setting the whole thing up had been a pain— they’d agreed that a real grass field was necessary, apparently, and soap-rinsing (not really, also did absolutely nothing for Ryan’s language).And then, that kiss... *swoon*

And by the way, if you hadn't said so, I'd never have known that English wasn't your first language. I didn't catch any errors. :)

Hmm, as for genre, I'd say I'm leaning towards fluff. There's a tag for that.

Really great story! Looking forward to more!
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