Date: 2012-12-04 05:30 pm (UTC)
“Hey, did you know you’ve got this thing on inside out?”
“Did you know you’re wearing my tie?”
Greg glanced down. “Touché.”

-snorts- That's such a brilliant exchange. Very in-character.

I love the whole fairy-tale element to this. And your portrayal of everyone was awesome - snarky Greg, hyperactive Chip, all brilliant. (Chip breaking into song last chapter was particularly hilarious.)
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