Date: 2010-11-01 01:10 pm (UTC)
*giggles* Another great treat. Greg gets a taste of his own medicine...awesome! ^_^

The only thing I would say is to remember to start a new paragraph when someone new speaks. For example, with this:

"Col..." he started, "Don't even start," Colin stated emphatically.

There should be a full stop after started, then a new paragraph.

Hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism. Feel free to hit me for being picky if you want! XP
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