Date: 2010-09-01 12:55 pm (UTC)
I really like your Greg voice. And that's a great first line. ^_^ Curious how you're taking this from here.

Without my, who was—Typo?

I do think this reads a little intimidating, though, in that it's one big block of text. Oh, I know it's not that big, but it's big enough for people to go all TLDR on you, and besides, you do have different subjects and dialog within the text, warranting separate paragraphs.
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