Date: 2010-07-04 04:21 pm (UTC)
“Order from whichever place’s number we can find?”—Heh. ^_^ Good line.

I love their banter. The snarkiness of these two is always such a joy, and you're certainly doing it justice.

Greg’s head was resting against Ryan’s shoulder and he had one arm casually slung around the thin waist while Ryan’s hand was trailing up to play with Greg’s hair.—This makes me so happy. ^__^ *cuddle them*

Greg once said that the reason why their routine was so good was because they knew that the other would catch them if they fell. Ryan had called him a sentimental ass the first time he heard that, but even he knew that it was true.—This is absolutely perfect. Before I read this line, I was going to say that you've embodied what I love most about this pairing in this story, how they can be sweet, but their snark lends an edge that keeps them from being overly so. And you've done it again in these two lines. Perfect. ^_^

A lovely, lovely story. It had me smiling the whole time. ^__^
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