Date: 2010-07-04 08:25 am (UTC)
I thought that was really moving *sniff*

I agree with gawky - you captured the emotions of the situation perfectly, drawing the reader in and making them empathize with Colin's fear and Ryan's internal conflict.

Well done! :o) x
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