Hello! Scared new person here!

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Hello,
I’m one of those lurkers that hide in the background and sit in awe of the writing on here. I’ve finally persuaded myself to come out of the woodwork and join in!

I bring an offering of a drabble, comments would make my day... week... month??

Title - 'Wet Again'
Author - charminglygawky
Rating - erm well very vague adult content and one swear word.
Pairings - Ryan/Colin
Summary - Drabble
Word Count - 100 whooo!
Feedback - any would make me vair vair happy!

 

“’I’m wet again...?’ I have my hands in your pants and you say ‘I’m wet again.’?”

“Got a fucking good laugh.”

I nuzzle his neck “That it did.”

“Shouldn’t I be complaining? You felt me up on television!”

“It was scripted, what could I do?”

“Not go so deep!”

“But I like putting my hands there. Don’t you?”

I ran my hand up his thigh, He shuddered, his voice becoming huskier

“It’s not a question of liking, just not on stage if possible!”

“Why?”

My hand shifts; his breath hitches

“Col...”

“You want my hand there now?”

“Yes, oh, yessssssssss.”


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One drabble... waits nervously!

But what I would really like to ask is would anyone be willing to beta for me? I am more than willing to return the favour; currently I am doing an English degree (though if you saw any of my work pre editing I doubt you’d believe that) and have worked in workshop groups to improve our writing. But they always tend to be the softly softly approach of ‘everything is wonderful, I think you may need a comma here.’ Those modules are great fun but I would love some more honesty in criticism! I can take it!

Now I just have to work out how to post, gulp, feel free to throw hard things (not pointy tho) if I muck this up... it is likely!