Date: 2009-11-01 06:54 pm (UTC)
OK, I have forgiven Ryan for being a prick in previous chapters. *glares at Pat*

The bathroom scene made me giggle all the way through. And I like how he and Max are starting to bond but still wary with each other - very natural.

Great work!
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