Date: 2008-08-21 07:14 pm (UTC)
Awwwwwwww Flo this was so pretty :) I mean, I loved every second of it.
The beginning with Ryan was sad- but well written. He seemed to shrug it off whilst Greg's heart was literally breaking, and it was an awesome comparison! Ryan seemed not to give a damn which actually made me a little bit mad at him- but Greg and Josie had to be together, and if he had been sad he might have you know- committed suicide or something. It's surprising how many times he has done that in fics. He's been dead loads of times. ^_^
So I think it worked really well. And Clive was awesome as ever. You should write some more of him! :D
And aww man for Greg and Josie. That was lurvely.
I loved this, and thank you for posting it ^_^

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