Date: 2007-12-05 02:33 pm (UTC)
Yay birthday fic!!! *squees*

“I need your help,” Colin countered,(...) “because I’ve never had to carry him this far before.” Oh. I like the dual message in this. It's probably my favorite sentence of the whole fic.

I understand that he regrets this whole mess,” Greg continued, (...) “And now he resents us.” Your Greg is this is very interesting. I feel like he's somewhat different from how you usually write him. I do like him all doubtful and woobie like this though. *pets* Colin'll fix it.

...wasn’t until that moment that he believed his own words See this I adore. Colin convincing himself, drawing his certainty from Greg in a way. Very nice.

Thank you! *hugs*
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