Date: 2007-02-11 04:52 pm (UTC)
The air was loud with the cracking of wooden swords -- I've always loved that sound.

Grabbing out a long loaf of rot infested bread, -- Just to show how my mind works, the first time I read this, I thought something along the lines of an overly happy "Yay...maggot bread." ^_^

I also really liked the Colin waking up from the dream transition. I think it just fits so damn well here.

potatoes, noodles, and some sort of meat. At least he thought it was meat. -- Such a sad soup. ^_^

Ryan reached out a long arm and snatched the man up by the back of his shirt, leaving his feet to dangle more than a foot off the ground. -- I don't think I mentioned before how much I adore this imagery.

But you know that I'm absolutely in love with this Greg. I always love your Gregs, and I do think that this is one of my favorites, possibly right up there on top. It's his fearlessness that I find particularly charming. I think he really adds a great element to this story, being so very different from both Colin and Ryan.
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