ext_133794 ([identity profile] sungreen70.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction2007-01-05 05:27 pm

[Drabble] Big

Another drabble. It's Ry/Col - I'm back in my comfort zone ;-) 

Title: Big
Author: Sun Green
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Rating: I'll call it a PG-13...


“Jesus Christ, how big is it?” Colin gritted his teeth in agony.
 
“Big,” Ryan murmured, tightening his grip on the squirming Canadian. “Huge…”
 
“OW!” Colin pounded his fist on the mattress. “Get it out!”
 
“Easy, babe. Just relax…”
 
“Ryan, that hurts.”
 
“Shhh…almost there…”
 
“OWWWW!!!”
 
“Ha!” Triumphantly, Ryan sat back, brandishing the splinter he’d just removed from Colin’s finger. “Jeez, look at the size of this thing.”
 
Colin shuddered, averting his eyes as he gingerly nursed his sore hand. “Don’t show it to me.”
 
Ryan chuckled as he tossed the bit of wood into the wastebasket, then wrapped his arms around his lover and lightly kissed his forehead.
 
“Big baby.”
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[identity profile] desiredeffect.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 01:38 am (UTC)(link)
Misleading writing is one of the best ways to get me to cry. x)

With laughter. Cry with laughter. *shifty look*

Fussy!Ryan made an appearance! :D

[identity profile] kekona-iolana.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 02:49 am (UTC)(link)
Ha! misleading writting. What a strange combination of cruelness and hilariousness. Twas very cute. Made me giggle a bit more than it probably should have.

[identity profile] corliamat.livejournal.com 2007-01-06 04:35 am (UTC)(link)
Ah ha ha!

[identity profile] anoel.livejournal.com 2007-01-12 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehehe I love it! I love how I can picture it both ways. And the double meaning of wood at the end. Verry nice.