ext_2301 ([identity profile] indybaggins.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction 2005-09-11 06:18 pm (UTC)

One thing, "I had only been with one mad before" One man, I guess ;)

I agree with Rising Wolf about the hesitant Ry/Col declaration of love being great. Squeefully great. :) Also the fact that they are all colaborating to get Chip and Drew together... Oh I'm curious about what's going to happen next!

And I've never read a fic where Wayne finds out he's going to be a father... I particulary liked how you did the characterisation of that part, Colin and Ryan leaning in and sharing, and Chip and Drew leaning out and thinking/hurting.

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