When he set the phone aside in his memory, he'd readied himself to venture out into the world. He readied himself for whatever would come his way. When he got outside, though, it was just another day. There were blue skies dotted with white clouds. In the distance there was the city and the sun that was setting behind it. He took in a breath of fresh air and waited. He waited for something to happen; but nothing happened. He went back inside.
Is my absolute favorite. It's so simple, but so very effective.
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When he set the phone aside in his memory, he'd readied himself to venture out into the world. He readied himself for whatever would come his way. When he got outside, though, it was just another day. There were blue skies dotted with white clouds. In the distance there was the city and the sun that was setting behind it. He took in a breath of fresh air and waited. He waited for something to happen; but nothing happened. He went back inside.
Is my absolute favorite. It's so simple, but so very effective.
Beautiful job!