ext_133794 ([identity profile] sungreen70.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction 2010-11-03 02:00 pm (UTC)

Staying In: “They're all hyped up on sugar and that little girl in the pink tutu is freakishly strong.” OMG, that made me laugh out loud. At WORK. And then just when I calmed down, you hit me with this: Ryan had a mummified Canadian to unwrap and Colin had Frankenstein's monster to screw. Awesome from beginning to end.

War of Attrition: I love your Greg, and the vulnerable side you showed. Then a big gooey "awwww" for Colin and Ryan coming in to save the day.

This Can't Be Good: Another awwww for Ryan rushing to the rescue. And then cracking up when he realizes Colin's just having a little revenge. This line actually really moved me: “Halloween last year, who hid in my study and pretended that they'd hung themselves?” Ryan blushed a deep red as he remembered just how upset Colin had gotten over that particular practical joke. It speaks to the depth of their relationship, Colin getting that upset over Ryan faking his death, even after he realized it was a joke.

Very nicely done, all three!





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