ext_133794 ([identity profile] sungreen70.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction 2010-07-16 01:00 am (UTC)

I love that you've portrayed The Wives™ sympathetically, rather than as evil bitches, lol. At the beginning I was all "squee! Ryan/Colin luv!", then Deb's voice and Pat's sadness really got through to me and I found myself aching for them. Very nicely done!

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