ext_96486 ([identity profile] clayangel.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction 2009-01-20 07:23 pm (UTC)

God, that's a great first line. ^_^

Oh, this is wonderful. So sweet and melancholy. I love the writing style. You don't often see 2nd person written, and I'm always wary of it, but you pulled it off well.

Oh, I can't tell you how much I love that you have Jeff smoking. It's a bit of a fetish of mine. ^_^

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