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2006-06-22 03:54 am (UTC)
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I like the start of this, but you made a mistake.
"As Drew opened the door and got out of the bus Greg’s fist thought"
It should say "Greg’s first". Just wanted to tell you so you could correct it.
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"As Drew opened the door and got out of the bus Greg’s fist thought"
It should say "Greg’s first". Just wanted to tell you so you could correct it.