ext_96466 ([identity profile] emilyfairy.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] wl_fanfiction 2006-06-13 02:59 am (UTC)

Y'know, you two have improved quite a lot with your story-telling lately. :)

I quite enjoyed this... I've always loved stories with lots of sexual tension, and this definitely has that.

I love how Ryan's whole family knows that Ryan and Colin should be together. LOL. And the part where they were holding hands without even realizing it was really sweet.

And of course, the kiss! Gotta love a good Ry/Col kiss... :)

Emily :)

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