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Title: The Mask Beneath the Hat Behins the Smile and the Eyes (4/?)
Author: not2bscene
Rating R
Feedback: is ever so greatly appreciated.
A/N: A very dark tale told in short bits.

As Ryan's eyes adjusted to the dimness he found a single kitchen chair which had a couple of remaining strips of avocado coloured naugahyde and was covered in patches of what could only be both old and fresh, blood.

Other than that, strewn bits of trash and whatnot covering the floor, there was only a small archway, about five feet tall, through which one obviously entered the cave. He compressed his body enough to squeeze through and found himself in a small chamber with a camping lantern mounted on the wall

The air was dank and mouldering, and though he could just barely stand upright  now, claustrophobia and terror were making him feel horribly nauseated.

He heard Colin's voice finally entreating him further into the cave. "Ryan! Back here, Hurry!

Feeling there were no options and breaking out in a clammy sweat, He went further The cavern actually became more spacious. He followed a small twist,  startled to find Colin standing there with ...

To Be continued

Date: 2010-09-08 03:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clayangel.livejournal.com
This is fun...you know, in a dark and twisted way. ^_^ It feels almost like those "choose your own adventure" books in the shortness of the chapters. I find myself eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Re: Thank you Clay

Date: 2010-09-08 04:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clayangel.livejournal.com
I've always had the urge to do a muliple choices fic. I found a site where you can make them once, but I have no idea where that is anymore. :P

Date: 2010-09-08 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rycolfan.livejournal.com
With who? WITH WHO? Arrrrrgh! XP

Nice suspense going here, keep it up! ^_^

Date: 2010-09-08 07:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rycolfan.livejournal.com
You're most welcome young padawan! ^_^

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