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Title: Climax
Author: Jie Jie
Rating: PG13
Pairing: Ryan/Colin
Summary: Inspired by Ryan's great line during a game of World's Worst (Self Help Video).  Ryan and Colin have little fun behind the scenes of Whose Line UK.
Disclaimer: Not mine.  Obviously.
Word Count: 201
Feedback: Constructive criticism welcome but I'm tragically a late comer to the Whose Line fandom so please cut me a bit of slack.  ^_^

"Hey Col."

"Oh just make yourself at home Ry."

"Don't mind if I do.  You know, we've got fifteen whole minutes before we're needed back on stage."

"Don't you look at me like that.  That look means nothing but trouble."

"Come on Col, we can do a lot in fifteen minutes."

"Do you not remember what happened the last time?"

"I think Clive enjoyed the view."

"Yeah well I nearly had a heart attack.  You wanna get your hands out of my pants?"

"Not really."

"Oh god."

"You still want me to stop?"

"Don't you dare...oh, oh that's interesting."

"You like that baby?"

"Mmm hmm."

"Does that feel good?  Come on, talk to me."

"Oh yes!  Oh god!"

"Aren't you glad I talked you into this?"

"Ryan, I'm gonna..."

"Oh yeah that's it, come for me Col."

"Ohhh Colin!"



"...Did you just call out your own name?"

"Hey, sex can be fun if you have fun with sex."

"You know I'm gonna get you for that."

"I'm counting on it."


Date: 2010-06-19 09:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rycolfan.livejournal.com
Hey, welcome to the comm! :o)

This was a very solid first attempt - a bit of Ry/Col naughtiness is always good and I like the way you've captured their sense of humour!

Keep writing! x

Date: 2010-06-19 11:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charminglygawky.livejournal.com
I really like this... don't run away! The people on this comm are lovely and so friendly (I'm pretty new myself!)

I really like the way you have to work out what's going on in this, it's pretty obvious by the end XP but at the start "Oh just make yourself at home Ry." could be taken as sincere or sarcastic, which I liked cos it makes you think harder about what you are reading.

And the idea that Col is with it enough to tease Ryan even when orgasming? Lol, major and happy lol!

Date: 2010-06-19 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] charminglygawky.livejournal.com
*drags you out into the open*

I know, I love this comm! Hope you keep writing!

Thank you muchly *blushes* I'm glad that you like it XD

Date: 2010-06-19 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saiya-tina.livejournal.com
Aw, that was cute! I remember that game! Welcome to the fandom! You totally got the two of them! So playful and hot at the same time!

Date: 2010-06-19 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] clayangel.livejournal.com
Heh. ^_^ That was really cute.

Date: 2010-06-19 02:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graciewoooo.livejournal.com
LOL that was brilliant :P
Nice one :)

Date: 2010-06-19 03:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] graciewoooo.livejournal.com
That's good ^_^
Never be afraid to write on the comm :) People are all very nice and very helpful with the work, and the writing is a way sometimes to get the emotions out, so never feel afraid to write anything :)


Date: 2010-06-19 04:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] draconica-nova.livejournal.com
Aww, this gave me such a giggle! I love teasing!Colin and sexy!Ryan. ^^ Nice drabble.

Many welcomes to the comm, we hope you enjoy yourself and that you keep on writin'. 8D x

Date: 2010-06-20 11:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jawyer-4eva.livejournal.com
v funny ^^
dont remember this world's worst though :(

Date: 2010-06-20 12:23 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thank you! It's Whose Line UK season 9, episode 19. Ryan's line is: Sex can be fun if you have fun with sex. Next time you climax why not yell out your own name?

I really couldn't resist writing a little something based on it! ^_^

Date: 2010-06-20 10:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luvstories.livejournal.com
Sorry I'm a bit late, but nifty lil story there!
I indeed found it snort-worthy. :P

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